by victor513
Aunt taking good care of her nephew. Would like to read what other presents she has for him. Sounds like he is enthusiastically looking forward to the weekend.
Write the rest of the weekend and make it good. each day multiple pages. Then come tell me when you've uploaded them.
Mistress Irene on humanpets.
Oh to be chloroformed, stripped, and made to perform. Aunt Julie I want you soooo badly.
You started off in past tense then switched to present. Confusing!
There were words missing and some sentences just didn't make sense.
'Do you like my breast?' - why, does she only have one?
It was like a fourteen year old had wrote it.
You've got a good imagination, it's a shame you're not a better writer.
I loved this story. The author has obviously experienced using chloroform in real life, the description of the effects are spot on. Many years ago a GF i had at time used to play with chloroform in a very similar way. I would try to resist the effects by wanking as she put the cloth over my mouth. The idea being the extra adrenalin produced by wanking would helps me stay awake. I was still out could in 10 seconds and always woke up with a soft dick and no cum. Great story lets have some more. Cchrisuk@aol.com
I dunno what it is, I've read plenty of stories like this, usually they're hot, but this felt particularly cruel in a way that made me uncomfortable. Which is weird cause it's kinda tamer than a lot of what I've read. The fact that the aunt seems more oblivious than apathetic to her nephew's unhappiness is part of it. Had potential but really fucked with me.