All Comments on 'Aunt Ruth's House Pt. 04'

It's getting tiresome, this is part four and all they do is nude yoga and a massage with a happy ending. Is this ever going to go any further?

This is not a 4.5+ star story. It’s not even a 3 star story. It dragged on and on. Four chapters could have and should have been consolidated into one. You didn’t even bother to proofread, but given your writing, it might not have made a difference.

Nor did did you bother to read your work before submitting it. There were so many inconsistencies and word mistakes that I can’t be bothered to go find them.

I’m simply too irritated. I wasted my time hoping for better. At the end, it never showed up.

You get 2 stars for effort. That’s it.

I loved this! There are so few well told stories like this one, where one character totally believes the situation isn't sexual, even when they have their tongue in someone's ass.

Please write more like these!

None of these kids understands building tension and "less is more". I love how the sexual contact slowly builds and how casual everyone is about it. Don't change a thing, especially because of these morons.

I love the casual action and the pacing of the story. Don’t listen to the impatient people, you’re doing a fantastic job! Can’t wait for more!

I love the slow progression to a committed relationship...

I think all of this action got you so worked up, you forgot to proofread. Still a really hot time.