by averagewifey
26th NC, … and yet you keep reading.
Do you know how ridiculous that sounds ? Own up to your fetish. It’s very freeing.
I read your bio and you wrote that you wanted to write snippets. That's what this is, but it could be developed into a pretty good story. Give it a try. I'll read some of your other stories, too, based on the quality of this one.
...to a good, creative story but not enough to be a complete, stand alone story. Keep writing, though. It has very good potential.
Definitely your best work yet. Keep writing. Very creative story.
and original! The interplay between hubby and wife is fun, exciting , and dangerous. MORE! .