All Comments on 'Avoiding the Storm Ch. 05'

I am so honored! I am trying, when it comes to writing. I am trying.

There always has to be some jealous psychotic ex that causes trouble.

How did that chick get to her first?! I hope either Adrian or Colin find her first. This is turning out to be very interesting turn of events. With both of them thinking that she is their mate.

Don't stay away for to long, gotta keep the fiends happy happy happy

I knew patiently waiting would pay off. YyyreeeeSSSSS!!!!

More please!!!

I guess there's is a lot going ,on is she the mate to 1 or 2 or how many?

In the previous chapter(s):

Zaira's middle name was Deja

Elena's sister's name was Evona

Elisha was the name of Conrad' s mate

These sudden name changes can be confusing to some readers, so please pay attention to that issue.

Otherwise, I enjoyed this installment and look forward to more.

Okay this story was already wildly entertaining but this chapter was beyond that. So many twists and turns..Wow. even with the odd name errors and other minor ones this was still give star please more soon

.... Nice

i love your story please write more quickly

Love love love it. Aww so cool. I understand big changes in your life. Its happened to everyone. Always been a fan. Cant wait for the next one n i so love how you hav a theme song for each ch.

This chapter was much better. I am enjoying the story much more. You have a unique interracial shifter (paranormal) romance going on here... and I like it! I may complain, but its constructive, and done to only make the story better. I like how you added a new villain to this, please let Elena get what is due her for setting up Zaira. I think everyone getting what they deserve in a story is part of the joy of a good story. Well I don't want to truly dictate your story... so I'm done. Some tales I read on Literotica are bad.. real bad, I don't even bother with a comment on those. But I hope you will write more stories after this one. Thanks for the entertainment.

So pissed that that bitch sold her into slavery basically . i hope someone hurts her.

I have enjoyed what I read so far. It's a new yr so would you be writing more chapters...like soon.

more please

Please finish I hope dat bitch get hurt real bad fo selling her nd Adrian saves her

It always amazes me when authors claim to have so much passion for a story and then never finish...

I'm going to need you to revisit this story asap! Too good.

Are you just gonna leave us hanging!?!

where's the rest of this shit