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All Comments on 'Awakening'

by MagicandMoonlight

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Lovecraft_LoreLovecraft_Loreabout 3 years ago

5 stars

Just a heads up, people in this group tend to hate stories like this.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Good start, but it felt more like scene setting as it finished just as it was getting going.

Would definitely appreciate a second chapter

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Was disappointed it ending so abruptly with no ending.

WhackdoodleWhackdoodleabout 3 years ago

Wrong category. Belongs in fantasy.

How hard is it to put a story where it belongs?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

More please. It's a good start.

MagicandMoonlightMagicandMoonlightabout 3 years agoAuthor

Just realized I accidentally uploaded an incomplete draft! Working on getting it fixed so the whole thing is readable.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Beautiful can’t wait for the next

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