All Comments on 'Awakening'

Entertaining and thought provoking — nice combination. First of your pieces read but will not be last. Thanks for sharing.

Very good story. Well written and intriguing.

A very interesting variation on the classic "Honey we need to talk" Lit. story theme. What's different here is that the partner doesn't even need to go stomping off into the late afternoon, evening, whatever; he's already gone. Chart a new course for sure but be careful not to end up on another sandbar. Thank you for another contribution. 5 stars.

@Anonymous Thank you! 😊 Glad you liked it. There's going to be more stories from this character in the future. Hope you'll check those out as well.

@sl_dave Thank you for reading and for your feedback! I hope you'll check out some of my other work. I would love the feedback. 😊

@Migbird Thank you again for reading and sharing your feedback. I'm glad you enjoyed it. 😊 I hope you get a chance to read some of my other stories and poems. Would love the feedback.

An awakening, indeed!

@Paul4play Thanks for reading! 😉