All Comments on 'Awakening'

by jimjim123

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Tx77TumbleweedTx77Tumbleweed9 months ago

This was well-written, but brought nothing exceptional into what seems a stroke story only. The only error (meet tomorrow at 9:00 pm) would have made it an awfully long first swap.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Just another Group Sex story about divorced fuck buddies posted in the wrong category. Sure, Muriel is a wife, but she's the side piece, not the lead female.

Tomh1966Tomh19669 months ago

Gave you a 5 just for everyone leaving the story well fucked and no one humiliated.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

I judge a story maybe not by its cover but at least by its title.

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When I a cliched title such as this -- with 106 instances on this site -- it's an automatic rating of 1.

26thNC26thNC9 months ago

Old couple decides to ruin their marriage.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Swapping with trusted, safe couples is the best. My husband always fucks me the best when he is reclaiming my pussy as his own after another man has used it, and me, a very willing lover. Your story is very good.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

I feel like the story went in the wrong direction. Has anything happened between you and the step-daughters that are living with you? That would be so hot..

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Not much to say, straight single male, enjoy reading and writing erotic fiction.