All Comments on 'Awakening Miranda Pt. 04'

I’ve read the majority of your stories and I enjoy them which is why I keep coming back for more. I like your characters you create, even with their similarity to each other, but when you have a successful style that many readers enjoy why make any drastic changes? You have carved a niche for yourself and you have a word choice and style of writing that is all your own.

When I’m considering what comment to make the first, and most important, question is: did I enjoy reading it? I’m not concerned about punctuation etc unless it’s sufficient to spoil my enjoyment. Otherwise I ignore it. What does spoil my enjoyment is when the wrong word is used, misspelling, and a word that stands out as totally wrong, presumably because of predictive text. This is a fault that you suffer from and which could be eradicated with more care in editing and checking the draft. If you have an editor then fire them. If it’s you then read through your draft slower, more than once, and with more care.

I’ve still given you a 5 because I can’t vote 4.7. But I wouldn’t vote 4 because that would be wrong and unacceptable.

...thought I'd read through and eliminated any predictive text additions, my deepest apologies if I've missed any; I know how this can kill the image when reading, and it infuriates me too!

Promise I'll re-check thoroughly in future.

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Plźzzzz Sputnik57 complete this story i like your characters (Clarssia and Rosa )