by sar1953
No real emotion shown in the story, the wife was on a win win situation with both scenarios, the hubby enjoyed the ffm as he was active with both females, whilst ffm had him in a queue.
It would have been better with some angst on the husbands part, to have some doubts perhaps. Just too bland.
The problem is with you people, not the author. I enjoyed the wife’s sexiness and ability to be passive and active.
What bunch of crap and lame story.....this is so stupid!
1* for this trash
What's the rush ? Spend some time on build up. Detail, so you stuck it in her, or she sucked you. We need more. Who, what, where, why on and on. Finally, lets get away from huge tits and big dongs. I've actually done what you are trying to describe, it took all night and only one out of all the participants actually had that huge set of tits or that monster dong. In other words, make it real, we'll enjoy it, and whether you know it or not, we want to believe it, . Now get crackin ! ! !
I agree with slow down. Describe the action in full detail. Don't hurry it
Very well told story, not convinced about one and done, I suspect the wife will want more, once a woman opens up to release her inner slut, it takes a lot to control the lust, it was her original idea so the husband may find she has the idea again.