All Comments on 'Baby Bobbi And His(Her) Futa-Mommy!'

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Carnal_wordsCarnal_wordsabout 2 years ago

This is unlike anything I've ever read. Bravo! I like the style. It felt organic and relatable. You articulated what it's like to have random thoughts that interfere and distract. Normally, as a writer, you want to ignore those side thoughts but here you are building with them. Very nice. "Traditional wet orgasm" maked me laugh.

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