by Viceanglais
Exciting as far as it goes, but too short. I would like to see how Lauren reacts when they get home - both horny. Will they catch her reliving the scene with her hand between her legs? Will Mike spank Lauren? Maybe they both will - and then take her to bed with them? Give us more!
An excellent set up with tantalizing possibilities. Looking forward to more episodes.
Great story, well written with a terrific twist. I disagree with some of the others that you stopped to soon. A good author always allows his readers to use some imagination. You left off at just the right moment so that we could finish the story in our own minds, with our own ending.
Thank you!
One more chapter and several more spanks should get Julia's attention. Get Lauren in on the action, 10 to 15 bare bottom spanks?
Superb! A sequel would preferably include Julia being naked for her spankings, with Lauren assisting Mike in disciplining the spoiled brat wife.