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Magic_CapMagic_Cap6 months ago

Romance ? Really ... ?

I was waiting all the time for something romantic to happen, but I was disappointed : In fact this was a (really) plain, IMVHO pretty shallow fuck story, at best a May-December story for the Mature section !

No plot, no finesse - sorry, disappointing !

lAnatomistelAnatomiste6 months ago

Very nice, genuinely romantic.

Please do _not_ indulge demands for "a second chapter," "what happens next?," or "FTDS!!!" The story is complete as is.

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Started writing erotica a few years ago as a way to practice for non-erotic work; no better way to practice scene blocking than sex scenes in my opinion. Now have a twitter @TDemiurging, not sure how often I'll use it going forward.