All Comments on 'Back To School Days'

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mischevious eyemischevious eyeover 19 years ago
WOW

You did a good job having them express their feelings for each other. I wish I could find a student teacher like that

don87654don87654over 19 years ago
This needs a continuation......BADLY

So is she going to stay on as a student teacher....or maybe a fiancee', or an impregnated girlfriend????

hecate_portalhecate_portalover 19 years ago
Good work

While the writing is good, the characters seem flat. If you continue with this storyline, develop their personalities. The physical descriptions are good; they just need filling out with characterization. Keep writing! :)

sacksackover 19 years ago
why not a series?

Her goal could be to recruit a friend and take care of two teachers at once, or three, or force one male teacher to take on another. The possibilities are endless!!

hathorbr1hathorbr1over 12 years ago
I WANT MORE!!!

That was such a hot story, but I want to know more! I want to know if they get married, if she gets pregnant, something! PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!

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