by anovelidea
You did a good job having them express their feelings for each other. I wish I could find a student teacher like that
So is she going to stay on as a student teacher....or maybe a fiancee', or an impregnated girlfriend????
While the writing is good, the characters seem flat. If you continue with this storyline, develop their personalities. The physical descriptions are good; they just need filling out with characterization. Keep writing! :)
Her goal could be to recruit a friend and take care of two teachers at once, or three, or force one male teacher to take on another. The possibilities are endless!!
That was such a hot story, but I want to know more! I want to know if they get married, if she gets pregnant, something! PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!