by anovelidea
That was such a hot story, but I want to know more! I want to know if they get married, if she gets pregnant, something! PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!
Her goal could be to recruit a friend and take care of two teachers at once, or three, or force one male teacher to take on another. The possibilities are endless!!
While the writing is good, the characters seem flat. If you continue with this storyline, develop their personalities. The physical descriptions are good; they just need filling out with characterization. Keep writing! :)
So is she going to stay on as a student teacher....or maybe a fiancee', or an impregnated girlfriend????
You did a good job having them express their feelings for each other. I wish I could find a student teacher like that