All Comments on 'Back to the Beginning'

This is the way these coming back together things should happen. 5

I don't think this is the way to address any problem the couple may have had.

Any self respecting husband would stop his wife and then leave her.

The husband was definitely a Wimpy and a Cuck.

Well done, good story, good characters and a fine ending.

You dressed it up a bit. But, this is basically another cuck story....Not good.

No trust, no relationship.

So, a young guy fucking her all night rekindles his love for her. Obvious really.

This was a great story of love, loss and starting over again.

just another cuck story sorry just like most on here 0ne for me

Superb story and so very realistic. I made an emotional connection tonight with Maggie and Mark. You brought all the characters to life. Well done. A most enjoyable read.

All the best,

Dave

A total bullshit story. She's a slut who should have been destroyed that night. He is just a wimp plain and simple.

0 stars

Just awful! I was beginning to feel sorry for Bryan for having been lumbered with such an appalling wife but when he gave her behaviour his approval it became obvious that he deserved all that he 'd got. JR

Mmmmm Not for me. Does she realize just how lucky she is?

Wife leaves him for 2 other younger guys, tells him she wants to change their relationship, & he wants to explore that change with her? WTF?!?! She leaves with those others, he witnesses them (that in itsself is total disrespect to him, not to mention the betrayal), the only move he should make is photo them, then pack his things & get the fuck out of there. He could return home or go someplace else, but he shuts off his phone. Then possibly, divorce time. What she did was unforgivable.

I also didn't care for the story telling or the writing all that much. Maybe because of the above, but it seemed like they arrived, went to have drinks, then she just danced & left with those guys. 2 stars Bob

I liked the flow of what could in the beginning. It continued in the middle with lovemaking and not sex. The end had mecaught up. Wondering if I was a Byron. I can say so no,never. I'm a Brian in first name only. But what few lovers I've had they were like her. I'm grateful. I've seen few comments now I know why. Talent is talent weather I like it or not. One of the best.stories so far

Thanks for sharing

Is this how British men deal with unfaithful wives? What the h*ck happened to them? Maggie should be on notice. Just one thousandth of a millimeter deviation from center and she may as well be the seventh of Henry's wives and not just Bryan's first. Maybe Bryan should put the shoe on the other foot and find himself a nice 18 year old female of his own to spend the night with. But when you look at him doing this, a 42 year old man screwing an 18 year old girl all night is a bit more than creepy. Quite the double standard, eh?

I am not a fan of Maggie's character, she did a despicable and reprehensible thing to Bryan. Then again Bryan didn't shine very well himself. He did well to put a size 9 bruise on Paul forehead, but he failed the Intervention by letting Mark use his wife. And somehow I feel that we're supposed to look at Mark as some kind of knight rescuing Maggie from Paul. But if he is one, his armor like his honor are tarnished and rusty. He saw a married woman, sitting with her husband, and started hitting on her in his presence. Ballsy! Then, later seeing the husband has left his wife alone, he moves in on her and doesn't turn down the assistance of his unscrupulous wingman Paul. Mark is a charlatan. Maybe Bryan should just tell Maggie "Fine, we'll stay together. But I'm taking a hall pass and you're going to have to get over your fragile female ego when I do!"

Really good, the 2nd half saved the first. The characters seemed deplorable at first, but you provided enough insight for us to understand their situation and journey. The last line is tremendous! Good job.

So some size 14 married woman goes out and 2 young college-age guys fuck her and in the ass no less…. My thoughts: It proves a the old adage that most young guys are so desperate that they would fuck a rock if they thought a snake was hiding under it. Also. the sex description was overboard considering the guys experience level. The story seems to be written by someone trying to point out the the female M/C was neglected by her miserable husband. So instead of a conversation with him she gets blitzed are ergo finds to desperate little jag offs. Finally any husband who is miserable as this one would bounce her out on her fat ass and lock the door. I usually do not comment too strongly on the writer/writing asI know it is to write a good story, but this load of crap was self serving at best and at worst written by someone who says if a guy ain’t or a mind reader he deserves someone who would break their vows Fido easily they are beyond salvage. 0/5

just another old whore and her wimp husband crap he kept the slut

Another weak cuck husband character in a femdom agitprop story. 1. Very predictable and boring.

Untagged cuckold story.

Scores 1/5

The hubby’s attitude and seeing her get fucked by two guys younger than there kids and letting it go means to me as a man he’s been cheating for a while. I will say from a younger self there may be nothing more exciting or better than fucking an older married woman. Many moons ago two older couples at a wild pool party where all were ossified had the wives being felt up , tits sucked and pussy played with as all danced out in the open . Two drunk angry hubbies left them there . That night after showers at a dance club it continued and a few tequila shots had them being fucked through the night by six horney college guys . They left the next afternoon to face the music as they were stretched , sore and love bites everywhere. Hopefully the hubby’s got laid as well and could forgive a drunken on time wild vacation but if it were me the divorce lawyer would’ve been contacted instantly

I would have kicked the old cow out of the house so she could continue to work as a brothel whore at the Uni.

A rapist, a cheating boy who willingly helps a whore cuck her husband, a cheating whore who cucks her husband by taking two guys in one session and giving her ass to a guy she doesn't even know; then you have a willing cuck... not much of a story about totally unlikable people. A one star story, at best.

As we know the British, the women are whores and the men are cuckolds/wimps!

It's a shame, but that's why this once great nation is inevitably going down the drain!

Well developed and with just the right amount of emotional charge to make the outcome acceptable. Thanks. 5stars.