All Comments on 'Backgammon for Blood'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
So close to perfect

Oh, the frustration. Surely an author who knows about seminal fluid must know that the tissue surrounding a nipple is not an aureole but an areola.

Otherwise, what a well written, well edited presentation!

beretta84beretta84over 4 years ago
very well done...

with just the right amount of sex. i hope we get to hear more details about the wife's affair.

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My stories are somewhat long, and have a tendency to develop a plot. If you are looking for quick sex, perhaps I'm not the author for you. On the other hand, if you're looking for erotica, not pornography, hopefully I'll be able to keep your attentions. Some of my stories ar...

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