All Comments on 'Backyard Pool Ch. 05'

Gah! Dangit, I thought for sure this was going to be the chapter where they crossed the final boundary, so to speak. The way the tension has been building, I can't imagine it will be much longer. Keep up the good work, and looking forward to the next chapter!

Yeah, running out of patience... 6 or more chapters to consummate one time? Great start the first few chapters, but the tension is starting to fizzle to boredom.

I’ve enjoyed reading your story. i look forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work!

Great story! 5 stars for parts 1 - 5. Please don't stop writing this series!

Thanks

Please say Chapter 6 is coming soon...it's been a while. Just hoping this story isn't abandoned.

Another great chapter. Keep it up. I like the way the story is developing. Keep taking it slow.

Really enjoyable ride.

This Is more learning shit then anything so far which makes it a hard read and your repeating the same scene over and over again its time to move on with it and quit trying to teach us things like we are in school I'm starting to lose interest in this if that happens I won't be able to read another story from you