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Click hereSaying that, he kicked his friend in the stomach one more time. Najibi tried to intervene to defend her son but she got slapped hard by the man of the house and sat on the floor crying while his baby making cum was still oozing from her pussy lips.
"What have I done?" began Najibi to think in her head...
Utter garbage...so this "alpha male sex God" was able to defeat another man in combat all while in the middle of an orgasm and embedded in the guys mother. Wow...hahahahaha...wow who wrote this a 13 year old? The guy had a metal rob as a weapon but still he got his nose broken and beaten by a guy mid coitus? ....mindless drivel
This series is written so poorly. It was a little funny how bad it is.
Alright. One, I applaud you for -trying- but well... This story was hard to read or understand, due to the fact that you're not that fluent with the English language... Also...In that particular setting, Yes. The woman would have been killed. Stoned to death or beaten in the streets. And on top of it all...? It's really really hard to understand most of it, simply due to the layout.
Just so you know, I got about 50 words into this and was turned off entirely. It reads a bit like the bible, introducing some 10 different characters in the first two paragraphs.
Ease off, this is just porno. We don't actually need to know each individual character's family lineage.
The only thing that made the story a little hard to read is the difference between languages.
I take it that English isn't the author's first language, and that's what made the reading a little difficult.
Other than that, the premise of the story is very hot, that of a young stud of a man taking the sexy wife of the older man away from him.
The sex scenes were very erotic and the author does have the ability to write erotica.
Keep on writing and I'll keep reading your work.
Thanks for the story, it was very hot.
How exactly does one 'carry a woman by her big breasts' as you describe on the first page? You know what, don't answer that. I don't want to know what that looks like in your head.
The sad part is that readers are going to chalk this up to poor English skills. Uh uh, the problems run deeper. I'm guessing that you're either twelve years old or mentally deficient. Either way, keep this crap to yourself.
12 inch?A ferrari?The guy fucking and reacts fast to Khaled rage and knock him down easily?
Taboo?Where?When???
STUPIDPLOT.
First problem people like this would have at least one gun kicking around, so the crap about people pushing around other people etc is crap. The husband or son would simply put a bullet in assholes head, burry the body and get back to living.
Second problem is whore wife. She be killed, most likely by her own family -brothers father uncles etc. They simply don't mess around when dealing with whores, the kill them or worse.
Third problem, shed be pretty haggard by that age in real life. I doubt any young guy would even want her.
Unsure if I like it or not. Don't get the incest part and feel that its more degrading people than anything, Will give it one more chance w/ chapter 2 but if the degrading cont. I'm out
Not worth reading. Author has poor command of the English language. Very distracting.
So Khaled and Mansoor are friends? Some friend Mansoor is... Would love to see justice meted out for all involved, but that doesn't seem too likely as the author seems to have a fetish for humiliation.
WTF is the author thinking putting this story in the Incest section? Personally, I hope Khaled rapes and kills Mansoor's mom in front of him then kills his two half brothers in front of his mom then rapes and impregnates her and never sees her again. Fuck this story.