All Comments on 'Bad Grades'

don't worry about the previous comment. it's just not their thing. this has potential to be super hot, but right now you're telling more than showing. it might be fun for you to go over it and expand on what she is feeling, images she is seeing, ie. the look on her dad's face, take us into the back yard while she's cutting a switch, describe the apprehension. you have a good mind for scenarios now just color it in a little.

This wasn't abuse. She agreed to the terms of the agreement beforehand and she didn't uphold her end. So she was treated according to their agreement. All she had to do was study more. Or did she have other desires from her father and maybe thought she could eventually trade a few of those spankings for another form of punishment/pleasure?

Just abuse. Not erotic enough