by erin2000
Laughable effort about a bunch of infantile existences in an idiotic tale. Happens when in the young years they swing to close to a wall. Later they get the impression to be able to write something meaningful.
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Great story! I sure hope the next chapter is out soon. I wish I could give you more than a 5 Erin. I was actually so into the story that I was thinking Abbie was my wife at times. I really think Andy is going to have a hard time satisfying Abbie from now on unless she is thinking it is Dean fucking her.
The pegging at the beginning was great, hope we see Jenna dominate him more. Well written story, looking forward for the next chapter
The mindfucking of Andy keeps getting hotter and hotter. Dean and Jenna are quite the likable manipulators I must say.. Can’t wait for the next chapter!
Fucking fantastic!!! More please. I love the couple tag team manipulation of the other couple. So fucking hot!!
Just came across this. Great series. Well thought out and well written.
Thanks for your work.
This is a really fun story! I'd love to see how/if Abbie is being manipulated too. I'm sure she's being played just as much as Andy. 5*
Just plain evil. There's the typical wrongs that people do to people, but Dean and Jenna are evil incarnate. They need to be eliminated. Andy needs to man up.
What a great continuation! waiting for the next part is going to feel like an eternity.
Not sure which character is getting the most sexual gratification.
The line between desire and blackmail is so thin! Surprised Andy's head hasn't exploded from all the experiences occurring at once.
Great continuation. Sounds at the end like both know that something is going on, and the other knows, but if they spell it out it will be too real.
Well done again and with lots of fun drama and cheating and falling down the rabbit hole. This couple is in for the ride of their life. Fun times around in this five star adventure. Cheers and rock them on.