by MissPAdventurous
No! Just wrong. This story is more than “just not for everyone.” It’s just wrong. Take it down.
Should have been posted as non concent!
RAPE IS RAPE NO MATTER HOW YOU TWIST THINGS AROUND
In a perfect world, both pieces of shit, mommy and daddy, would be in jail for rape. Also, in a perfect world, this author would never post shit like this, again.
I notice the tags do give warning. Unfortunately, I did not see them until the end. Rape is just not sexy to me.
Dear, anonymous hypocritical asshole!!!!!!
I don’t know why you’re grumbling when you’re reading stories like that right away, you’re hypocritical.
Dear MissPAdventurous
True, I was surprised by the violence, but you warned readers in advance.
Anyone who can interpret a text will realize that you have been warned.
" this is fantasy and fiction and should exist no where in the real world outside of one's imagination."
I don't know how anonymous can't understand this.
If the idiot doesn't like it, don't read it !!!
The only thing missing would be Hazel taking Daddy's gun (he's definitely got one) and shooting both of her parents in their empty heads. You said this story contained non-consent BUT this was the RAPE of a child and the fact that she turned 18 that day still didn't make her an adult.
What is the deal with some of these comments? If you don't like it, don't read it. Easy solution? Why read stuff that you don't like just to complain about it? Get a life
Why does there have to be a million comments on every story from people who act like they're morally superior and not here to get off on raunchy erotica in the incest section. Get the fuck over it. It's so annoying.
This story was definitely interesting: 3.5/5
Sidenote: I swear half the people on this site are mentally challenged. Quit reading shit you're into just to complain at the author. They clearly had a VISIBLE WARNING in the very first paragraph. Are you that fucking stupid that you keep reading stuff you hate? Go somewhere else you dumbfuck
Please don’t ever stop writing taboo topics. It’s a fantasy writing. It’s freaking fiction and it’s amazing. Screw everyone else’s opinion!
This was so fucking hot it made me squirt all over my bed hopefully Daddy got her pregnant would love to read about him breaking her while fucking her with a huge belly
I don’t care what anyone says, they clicked on the story and still chose to read after the clearly given warning. This was hot and you did fabulous. I don’t condone rape in anyway but a good forced sex fantasy is good! I wish there was a story continuation, maybe including if she got pregnant? Anyways, don’t listen to people you did awesome!
This is so hot! I keep revisiting it and it makes me wet every single time. Please add another part!
Say it was a true story, there are many culrures where the father or Uncle celebrate maturity after the girls gets her period. I loved the story. Looking forward for more.
another chapter where the grandpa visits. or an alternate chapter where the dads not around and its up to grandpa to carry on the tradition.
Fuck this is so damn hot!! I wish my parents would have done this to me! I would have loved it! My pu ssy is throbbing and dripping wet!
Daddy daughter sex is one of my favorite, but only consensually. Mommy and daddy need to be tortured to the extreme, humiliated and neutered.
@blackknight314 don't read noncon then, dumbass. Story clearly isn't for you.
"Oh a story in noncon with the father daughter tag. This must be for me, a person who doesn't like father/daughter noncon."
Finally got to read this one. Wow, it's even better than i thought it would be, I loved it. Sure, took the wrinkles out of Jr.