All Comments on 'Baking the Cookies'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I was so rooting for her

PESSIMISMPESSIMISMover 2 years ago

Lovely buildup. This is one of the few stories over 2 pages that I've finished. It was great how you described every step of the process, and every thought as her mind melted. This, right here, is why I read hypno stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This one was really, really good. The way Sam walks willingly into the very conspiracy she's trying to uncover is really good, and the description of how she's vacillating between submitting and fighting keeps the tension building and building. Fantastic story.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

So, who won? That was not clear.

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I've been wring for a long time and got into writing Erotica after college. I enjoy exploring many themes, often involving transformations of the mind and body. It's fun to explore the change of perspective that can come with sudden new cravings, whether from programming or ...