All Comments on 'Bank Teller Turned Hooker Ch. 05'

The story is unfolding and developing at a beautifully gauged interesting rate! Just love the style...Love the idea of using a man and his lust to meet the needs of a woman, regardless of his looks....Can't wait for the next episode....thankyou!

In the first installment didn't the brother attend Berkeley? Now the parents are visiting the brother at UC Davis.. Just wondering.

To Justplainjeff

Not certain where you got the idea that my brother went to UC Berkeley. I make no mention of Berkeley anywhere in my story, My brother did his undergraduate studies at UC Davis.

Turned me on. Brought back some fun affairs in the orient and in school

Beautiful!

I really enjoyed the first 4 episodes with their long slow build up. The sex when it came was just great. You write well and I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the story.

Damn! This chapter needs a 6! I agree with @robertjohn below, that you write well. All four of the previous chapters are important to understand the characters and context and really enjoy this installment. I appreciate the bits of Vanessa’s introspection that are revealed, it adds a raw, honest dimension.