All Comments on 'Bankrupt Ch. 02'

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masterhobbesmasterhobbesalmost 8 years ago
Great story

Ignore whackadoodle he doesn't understand what category this story is in. 5/5

WichitalinemanWichitalinemanalmost 8 years ago
Sucks

I hated this piece of crap. I speed read hoping in the end she would turn it around,that her father would vindicate himself but no that isn't what happened. Your outcome sucks.

mstrandprincessmstrandprincessalmost 8 years ago
Great story

We agree with master hobbes and as a Mind Control story you are doing a wonderful job, keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Awesome story keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
:o

More plz! Great story!!

Black_JadeBlack_Jadealmost 8 years ago
amazing second chapter

great chapter. super sexy as always. I love that you got the library girl involved. I was hoping that she would see more of her old friends. I wanted to see if they would treat her any differently. Of course her sweet boyfriend still loves her, awww. nice job on the she feels.disgusted when she sees her boyfriend.at some point in this story you mention that she "had been too poor to own a slave" but she was super rich before, so her family probably could have owned a slave, maybe just decided not to. Also, is she really the first slave student to be walked around like a sex doll. cause i feel like no one is used to seeing scantily clad slave students. cant wait to read more! thanks.for.sharing this.with us!

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