by Alex_Z
it was really good until the last couple of lines...........
Like it. Everyone needs a Barbara.
Brilliant start, loved the thought of the pegging to follow!
Good first story!
5
As an 80 yr. old, I vote this as fantastic!
Agree, really good until the last few lines!!!
Really good but please do part 2
this REALLY needs a part 2!
As author I can say this was meant to be a stand alone story... but a few comments say that they would like a part 2 so.... watch this space Barbara's Dancing Shoes (Barbara's Boots Pt2) is on its way!