by LuciousBi-Writes4U
The story was OK to good, but your failure of proof of familiarity with a dictionary was distracting, e.g., use of "slide" for "slid" and "beer winch" instead of "wench". A "winch" is a cable used to pull heavy loads with a piece of heavy equipment such as a bulldozer.
...of the Bare Bottom Resort. Of course getting there was all the fun. As always, after reading one of your stories, I am sitting here typing, rock hard and yearning for release.
Hugs, BD
great read enticing and sensual as always!
great write as always Lucious One.
excellent L~
I do like the way you write...<grin>
nice addition, a perfect topping for the cake
now eat it too <grinin>
excellent L~
I do like the way you write...<grin>
nice addition, a perfect topping for the cake
now eat it too <grinin>