All Comments on 'Bare Bottom Resorts Ch. 10'

by LuciousBi-Writes4U

Sort by:
  • 7 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
OK

The story was OK to good, but your failure of proof of familiarity with a dictionary was distracting, e.g., use of "slide" for "slid" and "beer winch" instead of "wench". A "winch" is a cable used to pull heavy loads with a piece of heavy equipment such as a bulldozer.

We2andmaybeUWe2andmaybeUalmost 19 years ago
job...

What a killer job! great write.

keep it cummin'~!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
nice

loved it as always! great chapter!

Bill DadaBill Dadaalmost 19 years ago
Getting to the Bottom...

...of the Bare Bottom Resort. Of course getting there was all the fun. As always, after reading one of your stories, I am sitting here typing, rock hard and yearning for release.

Hugs, BD

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
awesome...

great read enticing and sensual as always!

great write as always Lucious One.

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Talealmost 19 years ago
mmm mmmm good >>>>>>> 100 %

excellent L~

I do like the way you write...<grin>

nice addition, a perfect topping for the cake

now eat it too <grinin>

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Talealmost 19 years ago
mmm mmmm good

excellent L~

I do like the way you write...<grin>

nice addition, a perfect topping for the cake

now eat it too <grinin>

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous