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Anonymous7 months agoIn desperate need of an editor or maybe just reading back yourself. How did this get past moderation the mistakes are horrendous and make the story unreadable. You can't even decide which character is which
Anonymous7 months agochapter 8?
great story... read it back to yourself before you post, and you'll catch the biggest hitches.
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