All Comments on 'Barry Encourages Samantha'

Great story, leaving her bra off would get even more attention!

know where this might be going

I would of liked to know her thoughts of the man at the restaurant and what he was doing to her.

What a wonderfully loving and lustful story.

Taking the light rail train to cuckville with a cum dumpster about to catch a plethora of STD's... Nope... eject, eject.

Loved the story, I love the teasing

The scenario is a classic. Unfortunately the writing is of a poor standard. Incorrect words used, repeats within the same sentence and a lack of flow make it a disappointing read. You need to proofread better before you post if you want to improve.

Storyline was good, if not new, and this should have been an enjoyable read if it wasn’t for so many word, grammar and punctuation errors. I started with ‘this author can’t spell knickers’ when suddenly you switched to the correct spelling. It’s cuckold, and bugger - just so many errors I stopped reading before the end. Pity.