by gregscott
Fun story. Your narration really paints a vivid picture, especially the sex, very hot but not so overblown as to be comical. Good job. I look forward to the next installment.
Part 1 was ok, but part 2 was AWESOME. The description of it was done in such a way as I thought I was there. It was really believable and not really exaggerated like so many stories on here.
It made me wanna go find and fuck a Mildred.
Can't wait to see what he does to his daughter and Boss. 5 stars
It gets boring when using Bill doing something over and over. Have you never heard of the word he?
Beautiful. Can't wait for next chapter. Loved the the part that said "Debbie, did Dallas..." Getting close to copyright infringement there (hah, hah). Note to your editor: the past dense for dive is dove, not dived . . . .