All Comments on 'Battle for Earth Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Meh, no real character development, no real plot, no reason for most characters to go along with proposed storyline, and no even vague realistic reactions from any human other that the French striper

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I love writing. But the thing I love writing most of all I think, are smutty stories that have a story plot also. UPDATE for 7/21/ 2021 I am currently working on my Dark Roots chapters and working on a second installment for Family Business. be on the lookout for more charact...

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