All Comments on 'BBQ, Cards, Cum'

This story lacked a bit of continuation that is badly needed. With a mutual interest in each other's normal mates, why not continue it with a bit of family planning, with both women getting pregnant with the other's normal mate?

As a English bloke, you should be more careful with the language. "Girlfriends'" is plural possessive. "New" is the opposite of old; you meant "knew." These basic errors put me off from the start and I moved on to another more well-written story.

You guys keep recycling the same old stuff again, and again, and again, and again, and again, and again, and again

Borin.............................................................................................................................................g

made me wet.

Hot. Well told. Thanx for sharing!