All Comments on 'BBW Enchantress Pt. 03 - Cruise ship'

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NewOldGuy77NewOldGuy77over 3 years ago

Wonderful, but agonizing. The boy wants to love her!

subbrian773subbrian773about 3 years ago
Teen Agers!

This chapter forces me to think back to my own teenage years and think to myself... yeah, I was ALMOST that self involved at that age. Granted; the Enchantress is both a bad boss and a bad employee, hiring her paramour and all, but she is the one taking all the risks! The protaganist determines to make her his own, with no thought to the potential carrer ending consequences for her. On further consideration, this guy was way more self involved than myself or most of my 18 yo cohort.

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