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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

The second wish should have been "I wish you would grant my wishes as I intended them." Sure, that would have only given him 3 good wishes, but it should have been clear after the first wish that she is just as much of a worthless bitch as his ex-wife and should be trusted just as far...

FlynnTaggartFlynnTaggartabout 1 year ago

I felt it was not that great. Its one of those stories where the person who didn't deserve the revenge got the lion's share of it. I know that was the point, be careful what you wish for, but to me it just felt mean spirited to visit all this misfortune upon some poor guy who really didn't seem to do anything to deserve it. 3, kinda average.

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Some authors know the beginning, middle and end of a story before they write it. That’s not my style. I get an idea for a story and write it on the fly, never knowing where it will take me. I keep a pad of big and small ideas to weave into future stories next to my bed. I know...