All Comments on 'Be Careful Who You Trust'

by John_Vandermeer

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crazifootballguycrazifootballguyover 1 year ago

great great story line had me leaking real good

more please

cmj711cmj711about 1 year ago

I'm loving this, humiliate him, teach him to be an obedient pet....

arranmore13arranmore13about 1 year ago

Sequel page won’t open. Says there is a server error

John_VandermeerJohn_Vandermeerabout 1 year agoAuthor

Dear readers. chapter 2 of this story was scheduled for publishing today March 1st, 2023. Not sure what happened but the publication seems to have been technically botched. Links for it appear everywhere you would expect, but you get nothing but an error when you click on them. I have reached out to Literotica, and hopefully they will fix this asap. Hang on. I appreciate the pleasure of those who love/like reading my stories, like I love writing them.

Al_AnonAl_Anonabout 1 year ago

there seems to be an issue with ch2. It shows up in your profile but all I get when I click on it is 'internal server error'

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Loved it!

arranmore13arranmore13about 1 year ago

Any word on the new chapter?

John_VandermeerJohn_Vandermeerabout 1 year agoAuthor

Dear readers, tomorrow 3/10/2023 chapter 02 should be out again, hopefully bug free this time! And beyond that there will be more of the story of Riley wraping Oliver around her cruel little finger.

mattenwmattenw10 months ago

What do you think will happen if he reports this woman? She goes to prison for a very long time and is financially broke. She loses her license like this! Or does any reader really believe that things can turn out differently?

lc69hunterlc69hunter10 months ago

He is going to get what is coming to him

rbw65Xrbw65X9 months ago

I loved this story, or actually introduction to the story. I really hope you continue with your plans to make it a novella.

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Classy, seductive, wicked women. And the men who lust after them. Contemporary femdom relationships. That is what I write about. These women may be their target's very own wife. Or the forbidden wife of another man. They may be their targets very own mother, sister or daught...

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