All Comments on 'Beach Day'

Cuck's by something named Trevor. That's weak man.

I loved the setting and the sex. More please.

I have a problem with the voice the author used. Why would he be telling her what she did? Doesn't she remember, after all she was there? Secondly it was devoid of emotion, which reduced it to a bland description of the action. it didn't work for me.

Chilley

For the read.

Why would sane people do this?

Very erotic but needs proof reading badly. Goes south at some of the best parts. Spell Check is not enough.