All Comments on 'Beach House'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Retard

Put this under gay male you faggot

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
an excellent story

Did you notice that the author gives his age as 18 to 22? So maybe he's still a late teenager. This lad has a wonderfully dirty imagination when it comes to two guys doing everything two guys can do. I bet the writer's young prick was hard when he wrote it and he probably shot a nice healthy load at the end. I hope and trust that bigballs is getting all the hard cock his heart desires, wherever he likes it best.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
<3

I really luv this story yes it could use more detail and be slower maybe to show more character development but other than that it's great 4 and a half stars it's by far my second favorite story on this planet keep up the good work boyo ;)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
I like it alot

I love this story it's really hot

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Amazing

I am in LOVE with this story!! I love that it didn't turn into so gay fuck fest. It was about love and comitment and relationship. It was absolutely brilliant. 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Keep this shit in the faggot section.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Rushed, rushed, rushed

This could have been a five star if you would have slowed down, did a bit more character development, and provided more detail.

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