All Comments on 'Beach Slut Pt. 01'

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Bargyn1Bargyn13 months ago

Apart from a few typos a great story.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Who is Curtis? Thought the barman was Carson!

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Great story, well paced. Reminds me of myself 25 years ago. However, you need to do a more careful proof read. Nevertheless great - cannot wait to chapter 2. BT

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