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All Comments on 'Beach Wedding Blues'

by Kelliezgirl

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WantingToWriteGoodWantingToWriteGood6 months ago

A nice story but it repeated itself on pages 2 through 4.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Shame there wasn’t more and the story was just repeated

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Why did it duplicate? Is there something wrong with the format? If was a pretty decent story, but that is a bit distracting and detracts from the overall appeal. Not scoring it because of this. Though again, it was decent.

Dewey Cheatham

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

It was a great story until it repeated itself and there was no ending.

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