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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Okay, I guess. But why did you try to cram as many words as possible into each sentence?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Will this continue?

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Reader since 90's, finally started publishing, first in Portuguese (native language) and now in English. Constructive critics are welcome, share with me your thoughts or experiences.

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