All Comments on 'Beating the Heat'

Well written and imaginative- thank you!

It was too mechanical for me,,, to many she he's his her's.. I think if you go back and count them you'll see what I mean.... I really think if you added names to the characters it would have been great…

Right now I'd give my ass for an anonymous fuck. No names. It would be great. I've never fucked someone without at least an introduction, and I want to. Maybe names later, but not the first time. Fantastic!!!! Loved the story as is. Only one thing. He plugged the hole to keep from cumming. Must hurt like hell, if it"s possible.

Thank you.

Hello, Mr. North. This is the girl from your story. ;)

I'd love to get reconnected, and while this might be a little risky, my e-mail address is somewhat.crippled at gmail.com.

I hope to hear from you. By the way, great story! *smiling like an angel*