All Comments on 'Beauty and the Seducer Ch. 01'

Sharon is quite a lucky girl. I'm impressed with how sexy you can make a story in so few words! I had to look up Ronks, PA, never having heard of it. I guess it's near the Amish country. Nice little detail. Superb writing, congratulations! 5* ~~ JBE

Ah, yes!

So many fantasies, so little time!

Great story. Well-written.

Wish to have a similar experience on the train one day....

Well, chapter one was a storyline in my head for a long time. Beauty is based on an actual person I met nearly 10 years ago. She did expose her crotch as described. Most of the rest is fiction. But, this story is all the further my imagination extended. I am working on conjuring up chapter two.

Wow! Very well written erotica. I love the flow and flavor and heat of this piece. Having Brian reveal Sharon’s scent on his hand, from hers, is creative genius. The most subtle exchange of sexual fluids imaginable. 5 Stars!