All Comments on 'Because I Still Love You Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
awesome

give her an ultimatum she is up to something and i doubt its good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Sounds like she wants an open marriage.

Any person who lets their other-half party with another while leaving them alone at home is a fool. Regardless of the slant the author puts on the story, this marriage should be annulled.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Juvenile

At first, I liked the "damsel in distress" theme; then it just got weird. This couple seems to immature and juvenile; and why exactly does she work and live in another state? If she doesn't have to work, why not work in the same city as her husband? It's like you are trying to give them problems in order to make the story more intriguing. Don't try so hard.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Seriously, how old are you?! This is juvenile at best and you seriously need a damn editor!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Im actually enjoying how the story had progressed so far , and can't help but keep reading. The ups and downs in their relationship makes it intriguing rather than just a run of the mill love story .Keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Ken=manipulative, controlling, very immature

Leah=bipolar

Story=train wreck

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Hello there, I am an Indian and also currently living in India. I am an ardent fan and also a voracious reader of romantic fiction. And this is my first attempt at writing erotica. Hopefully, you will enjoy reading my submissions here. Looking forward to your feedback and c...