by FlannaFionaFlaherty
Another good story I remember going to dance halls when station in Austin and dancing around the floor to the two step and cotton eye Joe great fun and hot women some I took home and some I didn't but the trying was the fun.
Promising for future chapters but read a lot of stories by and/or about Texans before trying to make your cowboy sound and act Texan. I’m a naturalized Texan - 59 years - and three things perturbed me. Your description of Texas sounded like you read Wikipedia etc and generated a book report. You don’t call Stetsons Stetson cowboy hats. And, worst of all, you feckin’ DO NOT measure a woman in hands. Look up what happened to Jerry Jones when he referred to the Dallas Cowboy Cheerleaders as the “pick of the litter.” Now we love our horses and our dogs, but our women are NOT to be described in such terms,
I’ll try part 2 later and see how that goes.
I forgot to say that we don’t take our Stetsons off indoors because at $250 and up they are likely to be picked up by someone else and taken.
A great lead up to a series, and I love how your description of Becky was, I think she
Lovely start to a great series of stories, and I love your description of Becky- she might be my favorite of your characters