All Comments on 'Becoming a Model Ch. 03'

The set up and potential for this story was excellent. Having the father's email opened doors of opportunity. Then what? A disjointed first two pages. Candi's docile actions make no sense; not an ounce of resistance. Pitiful. Maybe there is still hope to save this, but not sure at this point. I really expected more from this fine author from days at "the library."

I don't mind these kind of stories when the woman is reluctant but then begins to enjoy it. This poor girl is just being brutalized and it makes me uncomfortable. The horror she's enduring isn't a turn on. She isn't enjoying any of this and it really bothers me. Her screams of pain and terror are too much for me. I felt incredibly uncomfortable reading those last few paragraphs. Won't be reading any more of this.