All Comments on 'Becoming Angelyne'

You have managed to lose me completely on exactly what, why, who and such but it is still a surprisingly entertaining story that managed to keep my attention and I don’t feel as if I have wasted my time which is incredibly rare but also holds quite a bit of promise.

J.D.

yes Dominus

awe yes, very entertaining. so good, not realistic, but hot all the same.

The Stakes are Higher Than She Thinks

Meet Brenda she's a successful HR professional who oversees a staff and gives orders. She regards much of Hollywood tourist traps as low brow entertainment. Coming upon a street hustler 'Magnifico the Magnificent' she accepts a $200 bet that she can't be hypnotized. What has she to lose?

Brenda falls for the `smartest gal in the room' trap. She's hypnotized. Having lost the bet, what does she lose? The answer is frightening. Read the story.

Becoming Angelyne rivals a Rod Sterling tale for the intensity of the surprise ending.