All Comments on 'Becoming CD Mistress Raven's Slut'

Mistress Raven takes it a little bit farther than I think I would like but this would be a hot experience to be taken in hand this way - certainly introduces this submissive to his new world and a hot read

Wow. Really turned me on.

That was hot! Can't wait until the next installment.

Raven't big cock sounds very powerful. I think Raven should have topped him all night long.

Absolutely amazing, had me rock hard throughout, definetly need more of Misstress Raven

Great stuff. Apart from a couple of xmall details you have pretty much written out one of my (many) fantasies!. Thank you.

One of the best I’ve read- lots of things I like in a scenario

Thanks for the positive feedback. I was working on a couple of different stories, but I think I will do a part 2 to this one first. You all have given me some good ideas here and in PMs. Much apprexiated!

I'm a married bi cumslut. Mistress Raven is a dream cum true and I would love to submit to her and her big cock.

This is the hottest story i have ever read the systematic taking and turning of a "straight guy" wish i could find heR

Very nicely done. Mistress Raven was rough but no too rough. He'd been a sub before. If I could offer one suggestion, have your characters use a safe word or words, or holding a ball in their hand if gagged. Also I think aftercare is very important. Not a fan of public humiliation, with the red speedo , but what the hell they are in Mexico, so why not. a little worried about the d/s relationship spilling over into real life. But i mean all this not to be critical, i just enjoy commenting. Thanks for writing this.

I wish I was the one submitting to Mistress Raven.Loved it