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All Comments on 'Becoming Daddy's Little Girl Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Love it. I want more. I want daddy too.

winterplayingwinterplayingover 1 year ago

Although I like these stories both of them were too short. You just get into it and then it stops. I really dislike having to wait to read another 2 or 3 paragraphs. Was really hoping this one would be longer. Won't be waiting around to see what happens next.

QuestionableMaterialQuestionableMaterialover 1 year agoAuthor

Valuable feedback. I feel most comfortable writing what I have in my mind and stopping at a good point - then beginning my next part once the previous part has been submitted.

For future pieces of work I will write much longer chapters. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Just fuck her

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I have been writing for upwards of ten years now mostly smut-related things. After toying with the idea of writing a book, I decided instead to write short stories on here.