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Anonymousover 2 years agoCouple of 'typos' within an otherwise well structured story.
Quite enjoyed your tale and education. Never really understood just how adept to-days equipment is.
FranziskaSissyalmost 2 years agoOh you move quite fast with making mistakes ...... Yeah an open back or front door or even the garage walk in , may an open slide door window ...... Now Mandi, better Mandi then a guy or?
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