All Comments on 'Becoming Hers for Good Ch. 01'

I'm sorry but Geoff was such an unlikable character that I quickly stopped reading.

Thank you for writing and posting here.

Thank you very much for this exciting novel. I like it very much. It is well written and exciting.

I loved it. I think another chapter exploring their relationship would be nice. I also would love a chapter where her parents return to see how both of them interact with her parent as well as their relationship. You did a great job on this story.

A solid first story about immature, flawed people. Thank you for sharing.

I loved the dynamic of their relationship and how she drew him in. It’s unclear why she’d want him, though. He comes across as an incompetent, loser, fuck-up. I think that required better motivation. Still, really loved it overall. I wish my partner did that to me!

I loved the story.

Really good first story.

Please keep writing!

Very wholesome femdom story aha which is very rare on this site. Great first story!

plz continue story - rly good

Keep going! Geoff slowly “redeeming” himself…. But also the dynamic of power exchange is great so far.

Very well done. There’s more to this story so please keep going.

Your writing is good enough to explore other characters as well

Good story, some interesting conundrum's. Geoff is happy with non-con anal rape, but doesn't want to be filmed. however I did like the fact Katie looked at him as a sub and not a slave, which is the most important part of a D/S relationship. Well written entertaining read.

Loved your story, felts extremely realistic and its so much excitement and fun

Great story, keep it going I look forward to the next part.

It was very good, keep it up!

I love the idea of loving Femdom, and not the cruelty, the outright over-the-top sadism of some of the stories you see online. Here's to hoping we see a catharsis in Geoff's future; he'll make a better slave/husband, if that's the direction this takes.

GREAT STORY!!!

Crank up the FEMALE DOMINATION!!! :)

The turn around sat the end where she realized she went too far made the story for me. Thanks!

Quite well done. Good writing replete with good plot, characters, and intriguing sex. More please, we want to experience the way the relationship develops.

I liked the story.

Now that geoff returned and agreed to continue wearing his Mistress's collar, the "Boyfriend-Girlfriend in public" relationship and the "Mistress_slave in private" relationship should be established.

The Mistress should begin to be stricter in punishments and lengthen the slave's chastity.

Since she has money, she could probably build a dungeon for her games and his punishments.

I hope you continue it.

Nicely done! Fairly realistic interplay between the characters. For once a sub who uses his safe word and quits a scene that's too much. You almost never see that in these stories. Also a domme who screws up and admits a mistake is so refreshing to see. A young couple feeling their way along and figuring it out as they go, A really good premise and of course its nice to see some love and caring involved

Loved the story, please keep going.

Thank you all for your comments, I am overwhelmed by all the positivity. Originally I planned to leave this as a one-off, but after reading all the suggestions I decided to release at least one more part. I'm working on another story right now, but I already have a rough draft for the continuation of this one, hopefully I can get it submitted this weekend. Once again thank you for all the nice comments :)

Awesome story, well written

Great story. Thoroughly enjoying it, keep going.

This was a well written story and more like life than mane others Ive read. When he got mad about her going to far his reaction was how I would be. I have played with some ladies and stopped when they went to far, slap my face, I get MAD, games over.

Awww they are both so clueless, it's adorable. Loved the realism of it - I'd like to see their relationship develop further.

Great story. I really liked how he ran away, then realized her control is what he needed, and craved.

Please continue!

The story was well written, and i wonder if this was your life.

This is close to mine, i was a loser until a girl found me. She was similarly hard on me and supported me to become an engineer. Before kids i would work and come home, upon arriving home she would put on my cage. The sex before kids was great, we were very creative and have loving Femdom relationship. I can not wait until my children move out and we can return to relationship.

So i would suggest another chapter on how she turns this loser into a winner, but yet a devoted love slave - interested on what you come up with.

Loved every moment I spent reading this. A truly beautiful piece of art.

I was all set to go on a rant. when you humanized the story. I hope that they can proceed where they stay safe sane and consensual. I'm really not into noncon and forced chastity, not into the whole mistress slave thing either ( so why do I read femdom? IDK) good story for chastity FLR kinksters.

First attempt ??? Great work. Hope to see several more chapters before you move on to your new story.

It was very cool. I can't wait for your new stories

Really good. Not sure why her confidence comes and goes.

The comments by sychman24 are so right on. Kate assumed too much and went too far. Geoff used his sage word to his credit and that led to a discussion into the contours and rules of their relationship. Hooray for them!!

But now I worry about those returning parents. Will they be horrified at finding her with a man? A man living in their house?! How soon till they figure out their “ arrangement?” Then what? Oh dear. J.