All Comments on 'Becoming His Ch. 06'

A 5 Star tale of drama discovery emotions and worlds colliding and pure entertainment. Well done with great characters and wonderful storytelling. Thanks for your time to write it. Looking forward to more of this groups adventures. Cheers

Why did you stop? This is quite good!

This is amazing, please continue soon. Reading the final stormy paragraphs of this story seem so synchronous as this story has kept me company for the last 3 weeks. I love/hate this. Your writing is as fantastic as it is descriptive. Because of your clear use of visual imagery I found myself literally sucked into the plot and out of my own world. Please don't make us wait too long.

One of my favorites. I check daily for the next. Fantastic work

I loved your story so much. You are a wonderful writer. I'll check back in a few months! Please continue soon. I have to read their happy ending! Thank you for writing this!

Why did it have to end?! :(.

I was definitely hoping for a happier ending. Like a breakthrough for him & her. Please continue

This is one of the best, if not the best, story that I've read here. You truly have an amazing writing style.

This story continues in Lost and Found, Chapter 1: https://literotica.com/s/lost-and-found-ch-01-8. Thanks to everyone for reading!

Relatable and terribly sad for these types of men and the women they ensnare

I enjoyed reading becoming his so very much. And I cannot wait for the next part of their story. The Indian apart 6 did tear me up. But I can't like to see how their story does end up.